Tabithalillian

again you have a nice writing style, but a few things I noticed. One: this girl this "bella" has almost no emotion, she is like a robot. Two: Ok I ...

OOOh, be careful. I know this has been said but I am just a littler nervous, a girl who is a sophmore in highschool goes to live with her father, ...

Yes, it is a curse, but I adore Ameila so much and I am glad that I am not the only one. For a little while there I though I ...

goodness! you make every thing so real and amazing! Though this story is much diffrent than Panic is it amazingly wonderful. Again you write so fluidly and your charecters are ...

Ok before I start I want to thank every one who has given me constructive critisim! it really helps me and this is just my rough draft, I post on ...

Oh my gosh I adore you! I like getting nice reviews on my website but most of them are "Oooh this is so good post more." Those are nice but ...

dang now I have to go to bed, in my room, in the dark, WITH AN OPEN WINDOW. dang im shutting it now. Well you writing is wonderful you make ...

tee hee! Yes very close. I really liked Bloodline, it was amazing very elegent yet strange and off beat. I look nothing like my avatar though.

Thank you everyone for responding! 1.Frozen gummy bears are most tasty 2. As I said before, Chiche is my speacilty 3. do you like my avatar? i made it my ...

I really really really liked it. It was very sweet and beautiful. One thing, the shirt, what imposrtance did it have, I mean I think it should stay in there ...

it is slightly cheesy yet interesting and original, and what good story doesnt have a little bit of cheese? I think you should definetly do it. Writing is only really ...

THat was amazing! You got Jacob black down pat! Your writing style mocks Stephenie Meyer's perfectly. I love the description I love how well you know jacob to make him ...

You work is wonderful. I really love how descriptive and how you have captures the Victorian Era perfectly. One thing is some times you thow in modern day language like ...

Ok it was ok, one thing is that when you talk about this girl named Pandora, you use her name A LOT. pandora did this, then pandora did this, then ...

why thank you! and I love your avatar!