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Re: Random, but I could use a little bit of social advice. .
Umm I kinda like this guy at shcool and have now idea how to talk to him or introdice myself, I think he has a slight idea of who I ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: I need a critique-er
I need one for my storys Less Then Perfect and A Bloodied Rose. both are vampire storys, A Bloodied Rose is a tad like twilight and Less Then perfect, takes ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Music of the Night 2
“Who are you?” I asked softly and quietly, like I was talking to a child not a boy that looked like he was at least ten years older than I. ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 1
I am an awful nit-picker since I stink at grammar myself but I though you gave all the charecters some flarour and attitude so they werent just flat old puppets ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
lol! Nice!!! I posted the next section, check it out!
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose Part four
I thought briefly about Ethel and Lee. Sometimes I envied them so much. They were so innocent. They would both die after a happy life some day, and Ethel would ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
thank you for the compliment, I will post the fourth installment today, but first one thing yes I tend to use books I admore as a crutch for my storys, ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part three
I edited it but I am keeping gal in the alley, I adore a good bit of cliche once and a while!
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part two
thank you for heavy nit-pickers! Thank you so much, I edited part three but it is early and I would only screw it up more so I shall edit it ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Alice's Critique Shop
ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: looking for a fantasy romance pls
ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Feed Meee..
ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Music of the Night
This is a story that shall kinda play out with a phantom of the opera-e feel. Well harsh reviews welcome, my grammer and paragraphing skill suck but it is a ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
thank you so much jasmine!
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part three
I pulled a black tank and a pair of dark jeans on that morning for school. That whole "all vampires are Goth" thing is a load of crap, but I ...
Sep 2, 2008
