Tabithalillian

This seems flat and honestly there could be a bit more here to work with. The person above me also has already said what is on my mind. When some ...

This seems like a decent story, well written and interesting. But as people have said before me you could go a little more in depth. Really make me feel what ...

I thought the books were an easy read but well written. It was a good 'old classic vampire story about a boy named Darren Shan. He also narrated the story ...

This is great. I am not sure what did it for me but I really really enjoyed this. There was emotion and power behind it and it made me step ...

Hey! I am not big into nitty-gritty stuff so here is just a brief critique of what I thought of the piece. The beginning seemed quite good and very in ...

thanks so much! Man I need to work on my knife drawing skills! Every one has thought that was her dress, it was actually a meat cleaver, a huge knife ...

So how have I improved, or un-improved or what ever you think. I just watched sweeney todd and that movie was amazing! The singing the acting and meat pies! I ...

I thought this was cute! I am an awful nit-picker to I shall just offer a critique. First off I liked how you explained to us your situation in the ...

thanks sooo much! Off to get my red pen and fix things! I really love it when people rip my stories to shreds. Yes, in this first section she has ...

Before you read this please keep in mind that this is my first installment and it does change from the 'teenage girl falls in love with a perfect vampire' I ...

ha! I do write really really small! I will work on that, but that you so much for the star!

Well all my friends are like spending three hours on face book and I am just like browsing around here on the art and photography or the romantic fiction boards, ...

I have no idea how to draw it! Ha ha! HOLY SHIZZZZ I GOT A HUG FROM MEEP! (sorry but I am like a huuge fan and a strange child....) ...

Ok, it isnt nearly as good as your meep but I decided that I would draw you a little random picture durring science class and study hall yesterday. And here ...

Id have to agree with you stella! My name is utterly un-artistic as well. Ah well, ill just have to appricate other. I wish I could doodle and cartoon as ...