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Re: Will Review Art and Photography!
Any one need some one to review their art (traditional drawings, paintings, sketches, digital art) or photography? I'm your girl. With nothing to do for two days I will be ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Afternoon in July
Beautiful photos, really beautiful quality too :D . Ummm... Could you tell me what camera are you using? Thanks so much! I am using a Nikon D3000. It is a ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Afternoon in July
Some pictures I snapped yesterday afternoon. Comments and critiques (no matter how small) would be lovely! So, comments, questions, critiques. I would love them all. Tell me what I can ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: The Vampires Story Chp.5
Hey! Tabitha Lillian here to review again. Once more, do not take any of this really personally I am just looking at the story and saying what I think of ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: NaNoWriMo Eve (a.k.a. Time to Freak Out)
Is is really awful that I only have about eight thousand words? I had the worst writer's block this weekend and just decided not to push it. I am writing ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: The Vampires Story Chp.4
Well Sela Locke totally stole my thunder but I totally agree. This entire story I feel like you are just telling me and not showing me. I mean every thing ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: What REALLY Happens In Middle School Ch.1
Ok just some basic critique here. First off try and stay away from "purple prose" Which is when you go too in detail with describing things that really do not ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: The Vampires Story Chp.3
Hey! I have been reading the story from chapter one and I dont want to sound like a total jerk but the story seems flat. Like you are bopping all ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: My First NaNoWriMo
Thanks every one. some of these tips will really help. Now all I need is some gummy bears and a comfy seat and I should be all set. I think ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Word Counts!
3,593. I blame home work this week.
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: My First NaNoWriMo
Hey every one! This is my first time participating in national novel writing month. And I am super stoked. I just have a few questions and concerns that people can ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Emmanuel
Thanks to every one! I know it is confusing and short but you told me just what I wanted to hear! If I do post the next part then I ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Emmanuel
Yep, this is just like the introduction to see how others react to it and for others to give me any suggestions.
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: Breena (One)
I really enjoyed this piece. There was a little cheesy-ness and a little cliche but still awesome. In my opinion all good stories have a little cheese and cliched material. ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: Emmanuel
Hey every one! I has been forever since I was last on but since it is NaNoWriMo I decided I would participate this year and try to write a novel. ...
Nov 2, 2009
