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Re: Cross My Heart~1
Ah... I figured this is where you were heading when I read This totally had to be written, I swear. But, whatever... I, myself, have gone here before. I can't ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Girl 1
Oooooh... cool... I like this. The shadowing looks really good to me... and yeah, it's really smooth and pretty and cute! Like JoJo said, she has no feet DX and, ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: White Demons Chapter 1
Hmmm.... very intruiging... I think Kafka got all the little nitpicks, so I'll just tell you what I think... 1- I'd like it if you described the girl who comes ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Glitter In the Dark-Prologue
Hey Ally! So, I'm not going to leave a really long review, sorry... but I just thought I'd tell you what I think, and, you know, contribute to the Review ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Last hope CHAPTER one, two and three
Yo, okay, so I was going to do nitpicks, but... er, the truth is that you're grammar was... not great. I'll do all the nitpicks later, if you like, just ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Unbound~Prologue
Okay, so this concept is an idea I had a long time ago, but I just typed this up last night... you might not get exactly what's going on, because ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: THE Review Thread
Hey Stella :) Here it is: Forget the World~1 THANKS, and I hope you enjoy it. -- Tabby
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Story of Us (Part One)
Hm... another story about...... this . Don't get me wrong, please. I'm not saying this is unoriginal, but I have recently read/written something along these lines... (I know this is ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
I'll take one, please! I'd like you to review this "overall." I typed it in Word, so there shouldn't be any grammar errors. However, if you see any, please let ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: [removed by author]
Dear, I understand... sort of... look, when it comes down to it you can't just blow grammar off. It's as simple as that. When people give harsh reviews, it can ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant Majesty - Chapter Two
Okay, well, hmm... I think this is something that has to be done right. It's interesting, but... I don't like how it was made of several little tiny chapters... it ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: A Corrupted Angel (Working Title) Prologue
Well... I guess I should have headed your warning... the opening part did... disturb me... I've never read something so graphic :O hehe... I feel naughty XD But anywho... He ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Anyone care for an "Awesome Ally Review?" xD
ALLY! It's been a while! Remember me? Okay, so, here is the sit-chee-ay-shun: I posted this, and it only received one review, which I am very thankful for and all... ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
@Fiction: never say die! Fin Grimes I squinted at the grass. I didn’t feel it, but I could tell that, like everything, it was different… it was greener then on ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Boogie Man
Hello! Here for just a quick review... Um, I don't have any critisisms really... this is really sad... morbid, even. Which is fine. That's surly what you were going for. ...
Jan 20, 2011
