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Re: Tabby's *~Critiques~*
I was trying to think of a super clever name for this thread, so I went to the very back of the forum, looking for... inspiration, and I found out ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Academy for Young Demons (Dead | Full)
Riro For a moment me and this Fox girl just stared at each other. I didn't want to start an argument, but she’s the one who asked me, and the ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: My Great In Day Detail
Hah, funny. A couple of nitpicks... So yeah, I sat there chilling with Tyler and Andrea, when all of a sudden I realized it’s I went home. I'm guessing you ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Academy for Young Demons DT
haha, yeah, probably so MNC XD
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Academy for Young Demons DT
Yeah... I kind of wanted to try something different too, however, it seemed like a lot of people were already bi/gay, so I decided I would be different by being ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Academy for Young Demons (Dead | Full)
Sort of done... but I might edit it more Name: Miriro (Riro) Tilnar Age: 18 in human years, 82 in actuality. Gender: Male Type of Demon: Nikar- A sea demon. ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Internet Telephone
Good freinds when with telephone eat pizza.
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: What Girls Want~part one
Okie dai, well, I have to admit I didn't like this as much as I liked the last piece I read of yours... "Save the Last Dace for Me," but ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm a newbie!
Hahaha, I just have to point out, it's "Y W S" ;) no biggy... anywho... Fantasy! Yes, my favorite as well... to me it's just so much more enjoyable to ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Lilac
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
(I believe "beaux" and "beau" are both correct... or maybe beaux is plural, but I don't think anything's wrong with that spelling... it's sort of Cajun, but that isn't a ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Hello there fellow writer-people-folk!
Josheh! Hah, is that pronounced (jaw-shay)? I love it! although I suppose you'd like to go by just Josh or you would have stated otherwise or something? Meh... I like ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The grave of child
I stand by the grave of Tina McKlur. The type of girl who was just her. She was openly gay So T he others decided she would pay They were ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: The Unnamed One-First
Alrighty, I suspect the other reviewers got all the nitpicks, so I will just give you my overall impression... It seemed you jumped around... like, you were talking about Asytia ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: I Am A Little Fly
Yeah, it was cute, and funny... and, well, I sort of want to nitpick it and tell you which lines were unnecessary, and tell you something... I don't know, meaningful, ...
Feb 7, 2011
