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Re: Winterland.
Yo, Jas... I'm Tabby, from the contest, 'member XD? Oki dai, so, I thought that opening paragraph was excellent ... you used a ton of great imagery... at first I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Lakeside Pact
Okie dai, so, *cracks nuckles* let's gets started... I did sort of like the feel, and the way the narrator talked... there was some good discription and stuff.... However, It ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Spare~1 (Edited)
Okay... so, this may seem a tad cliche (or maybe not; I'm always worried that what I write is cliche) but it gets weirder... a lot... and, um... well, yeah. ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Return to Wonderland *Not accepting anymore Descendants*
Spades I’m sorry this is so long… and I’ve sort of partially adopted the White Queen… No one had her though, right? I kicked Deuce slightly, bidding him to speed ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Hi I'm Peach!!!!
It's the first, and best writers site you will ever join. Probably... I've never actually joined any other writing sites, so yeah. I love to sing too! I say that, ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The Violin
I'm made to believe this piece won you 15,000 points... well done XD I did spot a nitpick or two, however.... The shopkeeper grunted, annoyed, and resumed glaring at his ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: For Elinor: Annie
Awe! I like the big nose! I think it's really cute (the nose, and the picture over-all...)... To me, her eyes look kind of rectangular... you know? It doesn't really ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Return to Wonderland *Not accepting anymore Descendants*
Name: Jack, the Jack of Spades VIII (Or just Spades… or just Jack, but he prefers Spades around friends… generally only his family calls him Jack) Age: 20 Alice descendant ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Return to Wonderland
LOVE it. I'm very much so joining.... just one question(as of now) : How many characters are we alloud to have? I was hoping to play 2...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Fairytales From Hell
Whoooops, forgot to give a new one... How about... The Princess and the Pea?
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Fairytales From Hell
AH! I totally want to watch that movie now… but anywho… this sort of long :P The prince had traveled for months to reach the tower where the sleeping beauty ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: No Title Yet
Let’s start with nitpicks: I recognized her mischief tone and raised both my eyebrows. "Shoot." "Well... It's a boy. You know, the kid. In here!" She squealed. "Oh my god, ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Chaze
Err… in that last post you put Kim Gerard as the cat’s director, and James Flannen as the dog’s… (and I’d just like to say: Zain? Thane? Did not realize ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: The Chaze
I finished my profiles! I changed my second character to a dude because I noticed there were, like, 3 guys and 7 girls... and, like, none of the guys were ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Help with a name
I like Rhode... I mean, it's spelled like Rhode from Rhode Island... but that's fine. Rhode makes me think of a really chill person that doesn't care about what others ...
Apr 3, 2011
