TabbyGirl

Hello MNC! So, I'm here to review and all XD Something I really liked about this was how you started off with; I tried to scream, but it got caught ...

Aye, Allie! Allie Rose? OMJosh, I love that name!!!

This was.... really... *shivers*... harsh. But good. I liked it... however, the end was a little bit disappointing... I mean, it seemed like you were just telling us what happened ...

I like the flowers... the thing is, I just like them. They're really nice, but not super effective in making me have an emotional response or something... The little girl ...

Hmmmm... Intriguing XD I think a lot of people (me included) can relate to this... Wanting to talk to that person who you're going to fall in love with now, ...

*whistles* Nice. I love her eyes... they look really nice and detailed XD And, well, those are some creepy little fairies you've dreamed up, eh? I love them. They're perfectly ...

Hi XD So, I started reading this, and I was like "YES! I think I'm going to like this story!" Because I love stories about weddings, and I was looking ...

I thought this was a really adequate prologue... I mean, it was sort of confusing in an "I really don't know what you're talking about" sort of way, but... it's ...

I liked this because it had a lot of random fantasy aspects, and it seemed to work... Although, I think, perhaps, you should have started a bit further back... where ...

'Ello my good chap, happy May Day! Now, as for the review... This was powerful... but part of me thinks it could be even more powerful (the part about her ...

Good morning/afternoon/evening! Hmm... weird... I was sort of expecting a deep, romantic plot type thing when I read the title... and, I have to admit, I'm a tad dissapointed... I ...

Hmmm... well, it was intruiging... I mean, yeah, I don't know what's going on, but I guess that'll be explained. This prologue seemed really random... but I sort of liked ...

Whoah! I'm sorry, not meaning to be offensive or nuffin, I'm just a tad blown away by how short this was... I mean... ah, man, this sounds like such an ...

...Listen, *sigh*, I never start with negative comments. But, I have to say; could use some cleaning up. I found several little errors... And, well... besides that... this was an ...

Hm... well, this was alright. It was just an (as you clearly stated in the title) intro... I'm not sure if such an intro is really necessary, because I haven't ...