TabbyGirl

....... Whoah. Okay, so, I this was the most recently posted thing on the front page. I clicked on it instinctively. Usually, things without titles frustrate me, so I didn't ...

This is for Jas's contest ... my song was Jessie J's "Do it Like a Dude" :lol: ( here 's a clean version of the song ;)) I know it's ...

Hola XD 'kie dai, well, I like it, but, as ever, I have issues with it... Positives or negatives first? Meh, I'll do positives, they're in my head... One of ...

Yo, Des XD (I've always thought that's a cool nickname) Well, after reading this, (and Rach's review) I have to say, I agree with a lot of her points (I ...

Howdy XD I must say... the writing was outstanding. I saw lots of awesome imagery, and descriptiveness and stuff. However... there are a couple of things I'd like to address... ...

Yo XD So, let's start on a positive: I really, honestly, truly like the message ^^ it was really sweet, and I could kind of identify with it........... Come on ...

I just... have to say... I

I have NEVER in my life reviewed lyrics. I rarely even review poetry, and I've always figure that lyrics are just too far out of my league (I'm more a ...

A couple of nitpicks (for the sake of nitpicks)... she couldn't help but notice a stain on his t-shirt. Okay, this is good. This works. I approve of this... however... ...

Okie dai, here's chapter two! If you haven't read it yet, here's chapter one ... I edited it some, mostly little stuff. Tallor was lying on his belly, on his ...

Good day! Well, I don't think there was too much dialogue, or too much explaining, however, something I would strogly suggest: give a paragraph or two before the initial dialogue ...

Hey there XD I have to agree with halo... I don't really understand why you repeated "she was blind" so many times... I don't think it gave the desired effect. ...

Ahh! Chapter two! Exciting XD Alright, well, not a lot seemed to happen here, which is okay, because it's a transition chapter, but after I read it I did feel ...

Hello again Allie! I see that you're a fan of Warriors as well XD As Rachel said, this seemed like pretty solid writing. A couple of things though... So, something ...

As you have probably noticed, some users' usernames, including mine, are colored green. Nice. You've been a mod (cannibal) for like, a day, and you're already acting all superior to ...