TabbyGirl

Well, there really isn't anyting wrong with this story... ok, yeah, it does sound kind of cliche, but still, there isn't really anything technically wrong, it's just that this is ...

Tanya, Well, yes, your review was quite helpful... I take critisism poorly, whenever someone says something about my writing in the negative I can feak out about it for up ...

Hello Tanya! Er... you don't know me... but could you please review this short story? Thank you!!! -- Tabby

Welcome! Hm, I feel like I really have no obligation to say that as I only joined this sight... 1, 2... 9 days ago, and you're probably more familliar with ...

I'm not sure if this counts as romantic or not, but that seemed to be the category it fit in best... I think it has a slightly goofy tone at ...

Well, this was pretty short, but interesting none the less... I suppose it was, like, a prologue? Just three purple caril , Kara thought brushed through the tall grass and ...

Wow... this was really good! I loved the atmosphere... I loved the writing, really, you did an excellent job. Now, there were a couple sentences I thought could use revision... ...

Awe, that's adorable :) I suspect not a lot of guys my age write romantic poetry like this. Now, look, I'm no poetry expert so I can't really criticize, however, ...

Haha, very funny :D Your grammar wasn't great... well, it was actually not good at all, but I suspect you did it mostly on purpose, or just weren't really paying ...

Hmm... interesting.... Well, okay, this is where I stand: I really liked the atmosphere at the begining. A boy named child-34? That was all quite interesting. However, it's sort of ...

Nevermind Nevermind Nevermind.... I got a bad review and found out I take criticism very poorly. I can't have something indecent posted in my name... especially when I got good ...

Well... it isn't bad. However... I dunno... I don't really get it I guess. And, I'm totally biased, you shouldn't listen to me probably, but yeah. Sorry, I don't have ...

Although this is short, it does sound really interesting! Um... I don't quite get what's going on, but I don't think I'm supposed to, so good work... it could probably ...

Whoah, that was ausome! This was like, deep, but not so deep that I got confused... really, I usually don't know what to say about poetry, but this made me ...

(it's a working title...) ONE “Your sister’s looking for you.” I looked up in surprise at my mom. She looked so sad. I could tell there were fresh tear tracks ...