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Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue
OKay, let's go over the things you asked about first... 1) I noticed no spelling or grammar errors, but don't trust me in this department. I type everything I write ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Until 'The End'
Well... uh... hehe... not what I was expecting... Okay, so, the begining actually seemed fine to me. There were just a couple quick nitpicks... She lay across his lap, her ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: @(!( (2010)
I must tell you, after reading this I just sort of went like, "...whoah." I saw no one had reviewed it yet, and I decided I'd just check it out, ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Don't Ask.~ 2
Okay, so, there were two or three people that told me I should make a continuation of my short story "Don't Ask." Here it is... look, I honestly intended "Don't ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Name (full name please, and put your nickname, if you have one, in quotes): Phineas Lewis “Fin” Grimes Age (13-18 please): 14 Appearance (Written and picture please): I can’t find ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
(replying to Cspr here) Zhabia (Zabi) Eswara “I’m fine,” I answered, “but, I haven’t seen anyone…” I looked out across the beach, my eyes narrowed as I tried to see ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Anime male chibi :3
This is pretty adorable :) I don't know what defines "chibi" but it sounds like a type of hamster to me... so, yeah, I'm pretty much a novice as far ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
Zhabia (Zabi) Eswara I stood up, and looked out at the ocean and saw the plane, about half submerged in water. My heart sank when I realized there were probably ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
(Awe :( don't be sad Cspr! This is a cool idea and I'll respond right now) Zhabia Eswara I have many bizarre dreams. Dreams like, say, being the youngest person ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
Hi, Cspr... I've never done this storybooking thing before, but it sounds really fun! Please excuse if I seem like a total novice... Name (First/Last, or First/Middle/Last—nicknames allowed in quote
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
tongue
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Pros and Cons to dating a Ninja
Very funny :D Maybe post this under nonfiction, it really can't count as a story... although it does make me imagine some interesting stories of people dating ninjas... oh, and ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Cheshire Cat
It's very cute and anime, and as you can tell by my avatar, I like the idea :) however, when I think of the Cheshire cat I think of a ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: A warm arrival never left so cold.
You know, this I really enjoyed... despite the pain expressed in the story. Honestly, I was confused during parts... like, I dunno... I just didn't really understand what was going ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Childhood.
Awe! This is so... powerful, so real, so... I don't know. It's like, pure and true and makes me want to cry because if I could I know I would ...
Dec 21, 2010
