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Re: Forget the World~1
(Not really a spoiler. Go ahead and read this) What do yall think of the title? Does it give it something extra? Is it too much? Will the image not ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Defend me, oh Chivalrous Knight (EXTENDED)
Tinkem! Thanks for the follow, by the way. As I’m the first to review I’ll go ahead and nitpick… No matter the situation will be by my side, you say ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter One)
I liked this idea... a witch who was home schooled until she was fifteen... sent to school to spy on Harry Potter... However, I don't know how technically correct it ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Until we Depart
I really liked this, seriously, it was so... different... It was new, it was romantic but it wasn't... great job. However, I can't say I see eye to eye with ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Can't Let You Go
This is well done. I really like the way it was organized... But I would have liked a bit more of an idea of what Adam was like before the ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: When A Princess Draws Arms
This is cool :) I really like the way her dress and the bow look. It's all very sharp. This is the kind of thing that makes me mutter to ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Fin Grimes At first I was confused who this man was, but when Dawn whispered, “Daddy?” and they started hugging I caught on. I watched as the girl hugged her ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!
Ok, well, you already have a lot of reviews, but I saw chapt. 2 under recently posted, and thougt, "I'll check out the first chapter, see what this is exactly," ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one of Novel one
Alright, so I'll start where you started: The introduction poem. I found that really great. It met my two poem criteria: It sounded good as I read it, and it ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Title Irrelevent Because the Story is Being Rewritten (ch1)
I liked this. So, it didn't exactly reach into my heart and touch my soul or anything, but it was interesting... I find I like stories more that start with ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Fin Grimes I tensed up for a moment, then relaxed, not wanting to let this person know I knew he was there. But it was too late for that. Everyone ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Oh, no big deal Fiction, and yeah, I know what you mean about forgetting :) Phineas (Fin) Grimes The dog looked excited, his tongue lolling out and his eyes darting ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Married Student Housing
Whoah, Socks, are you seriously a 14 year old guy?! Sorry, this just seems like a very... mature, and very... well, girly peice. Not girly, that's not the right word... ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Phineas (Fin) Grimes So this is what freedom feels like , I thought as the guards led me away from the lab. This, is what victory feels like . And ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me Not: Chapter One
Well... see, my main issue here is that there is a whole lot of fighting... I just find reading about battles is really boring. Not that that means you shouldn't ...
Jan 1, 2011