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Re: Hi...?
Hey Welcome :D Cool I'm from the south too! Congrats on finishing two novels! I'd love to check them out; romance and war? Sounds fun! I'm only good at starting ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Name the character!
I love this one! I think, of all your art I've seen, this looks like it has the best shading to me... the proportions look pretty good too, but I ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: May I have permission for a deletion of one of my works?
I don't think you can delete literary items is the thing. If I were you, I would just clear out all the text in your post, and write, "Deleted." The ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
I answered "Pat Buchanan" because I'm not writing a novel, but I've been TRYING to get one going for the last three years... most I've managed is eight chapters on ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Can we get 2000 replies before Christmas?
Good day. But Fez- I said good day!
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: What Animal?
I would be a cat. A tabby one preferably.... I just... like to nap o.O
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Random Word Game!!!
Battery
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Return of the White Flame (an exerpt)
Tuh-wist! I like it! Again, I'll start with nitpicks... as if on cue there was a horrendous screech as metal ground against rack. Rack? I think you meant to say ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The Return of the White Flame (an exerpt)
Leave the nitpicking to me! A grayed haired man drolled on. You could change this sentence up a couple of ways, but right now it doesn't sound right... I would ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: He Remembers
I liked the gist of this... it evoked some good emotions. He felt the tears make rivers down his face as it reflected the pain on his comrade's when they ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The First Son - Prologue
Hi S. Mylin! heheh I'm Tabby, and... yeah, I'm here to review. I'll start with nitpicks and the like: All had been well until this night, when Eden, expectant mother ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Maggie: A Love Story (Prolouge)
First thing, and, I hate to sound naggish, but look, you can't just post a big block of words like this! It isn't even that long, dude, you could space ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter Three
Kafka, my dear! I believe this is the very first time that I've reviewed something of yours... I was up late, bored, there was nothing to watch on TV, and ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Little Tommy and the Red Coats Preface/Chapter 1
Good day X) Um... okay, well, I have to admit, the biggest issue I have is probably with "Elizabeth." I mean... take this, for example. “I can’t Elizabeth,” he whispered, ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Visual Commentary
Cute XD I love where you came from, the overall idea was really different (in a good way!) I'd like to point out a couple of things Left Eye: [alone ...
Jun 11, 2011