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I loved this story! This was one of the stories that made me want to join Young Writers Society! I admire this story! Thank you for inspiring me to join ...

I don't generally understand this poem. Well, I'm not one to judge on the flow of poems because I have a hard time understanding it at times. But you need ...

I had this happen to me before. I was depressed for a few years of my life because a lot of things were changing. You sound like this must have ...

I liked the story! I liked how you used not only dialogue but the thoughts of the main character. I would love to see more!

Thanks for replying! Actually FS stands for some one who backstabbed me recently. But thank you so much! I'm not really good at spelling or grammar so thanks for helping ...

My privacy has been breached My every thought read aloud My sanctuary has turn into a battle field My hopes shriveled like a dry leaf My dreams spoiled like sour ...