TPak

There is only one type of person I watch out for. It is not the jocks, Goths, populars, or the mysterious kids, it’s the dorks, the kids who always get ...

Thank you all for your constructive critism! I usually don't get a lot if you couldn't tell, because people are scared to tell me. They think I'll go over the ...

I had this happen many times. I love your work how it has your own personal twist in it. But as you asked, I tell you how I think you ...

The first copy of this poem was written on my bedroom window with dry erase marker. Surprisingly I was happy while writing it. I know, I'm weird. :D Here you ...

I like the rhyming scheme and the metophors. Great work and keep writing! :D

For this poem you need to capitalize the first letter in every line. So instead of because I know that you will always be apart of what you should do: ...

I like this poem. It really shows you know what it's like to have pain inside. Again, good poem and you have a gift to take what's inside and write ...

I liked it. I've also felt like this before where everyone is pretty much surrounding you and you feel like you might suffocate. Just some suggestions I have for you. ...

This was a powerful poem. I like how you used different ways to describe how sad the character is. How the their heart is broken. I have to say my ...

This is pretty good. I'm sure it would be twice as good if you put it to music. It reminds me a bit like cheatercheaterbestfriendeater by nevershoutnever. And that's a ...

Hey, a little easy on the langue! Just kidding with you. This is pretty good. Just here is some corrections: not a single word, for my yeears of pain I'm ...

I wrote this while mad at some of my friends. I don't exactly remember why but I do remember typing fiercely on the keyboard and saving the document. And if ...

I love how you write this in second person. I don't usually come across work like this that I like. I like how you use memories to explain the circumstances ...

I liked this poem. I just wished you capitalized it's one of my pet peeves. That actually goes along with my poem FS. That sounds like my backstabber's reaction. I ...

I love this story! I have choked on cigarette smoke before because I used to have family that smoked wildly, but this did describe what it's like being choked by ...