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I just finished reading both chapters and I'm hooked. I love the plot and everything else. I can easily relate to Alexandria when she talks about her family and how ...

I actually read vampire diaries as a joke but I got pulled in! I thought it came out after Twilight but it came out before. My favorite by L.J. Smith ...

“Kelley? Are you okay?” I heard my mom’s voice. She ran to me and helped me up. “Why are you down here so early?” my mom asked. Her eyes searched ...

I agree with the revisions of a previous reviewer. But overall it was good. My favorite stanza would have to be, I am slow and burning expecting every particle within ...

Hello there! This poem was really good. I rather like how he/she tells about how they regret leaving their lover. There was just one thing I suggest. In this stanza: ...

This poem is a lot better than some others I've seen about death. Probably the best I've seen. It seems like you had a tragic experience like this happen to ...

I just finished reading this chapter and I'm officially in love with Taboo. Your very skilled at writing! I love Lucas because he is just kind of the silent, mysterious ...

Like everyone else said, love it! You're an awesome writer so keep writing!

This poem isn't about the same backstabber in my other ones. It's actually about all the people that harassed me throughout my grammar school years and what I wanted to ...

Thank you all for your comments and constructive critism! I will be changing the errors, but thank you for spending your time and reading over my work. I would like ...

I like how you interpret your feelings into this piece. I believe it's about the narators parents and how there trust changes while they grow up. I have had the ...

I like the rhymem scheme and how you interperet that love doesn't usually last. You're very truthful about what you write and that's why I love your work. Keep writing!

I'm a book worm. I can get stuck in any book, and now I got stuck in this one. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I don't have much to say . . .

Thank you for your help! I started this awhile ago before I really knew how to write and so I just tweaked it a little. I had a feeling that ...