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I have to thank my friend watermelonspots for coming up with the title The Sun’s sister’s light falls down upon me. Her glow shimmers off of my usually invisible extensions. ...

Hey Eternal, T here. I found this poem quite engaging. I was caught into it by about the second stanza. The picture it creates is heartbreaking yet so true. We ...

Thanks, I was really unsure about this (you can see why with my other story the gray line. Ugh, it's terrible!) but thanks for your input. I knew it was ...

“We’re here!” my mother said. Great. Now not only am I a geek going to the renaissance faire in a costume, but a geek going to the renaissance faire in ...

Finally, a crime scene investigation! I decided to take my keyboard off caps lock for once. Is the young cop Derek Young? Because I don't remember another character name Derek. ...

Yellow! T here! Thanks for your message! I thought it was very interesting and like another reviewer said, it was like the book The City Of Ember , but it ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to review this for you (thanks for the PM). I like how your main character, Kyle, he's very intellectual and you use most of ...

Thanks for sending me a message! I just simply fell in love with this novel when I first read it! Alexandria kicks butt! I love how you created her character! ...

YYYEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! I LOVE THIS FREAKING NOVEL!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!:D

I love the imagery! I could actually feel how she did, well I kind of had before but that's another story . . .Anyway I really like how you sucked ...

Thanks for the feedback. Gladly all of you told me about this before I turned it in to my teacher for my creative writing assignment. I'll either tweak this one ...

~deleted~ I hated this poem I wrote and it wasn't even good. My friend told me she liked it so I put it up but it, well . . . ...

When I read the title I was a bit unsure that I would like the poem. Well this is coming from a girl who's friend dressed up as a princess ...

Yeah, I realized that. I'm thinking about getting rid of this piece. My friends say that poetry is my thing anyway so . . . any objections?

Hi, Smriti! This was a great narrative poem. It really sucked you in. But there was a few typos but not enough to ruin your effect. One was that on ...