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Hey Boo, T here. I have to say I like the rhyming and it takes a skilled person to make a rhyming poem because it's hard to find the words. ...

I haven't written this in awhile, I hope it's good! I hurried up to my room after dinner. Dodging all of Mrs. And Mr. Trevor’s questions was exhausting. I have ...

First off I just love the metaphors! Is this poem made from an experience with a dumb boyfriend/girlfriend? I like how you interpreted the hurt and rage that the narrator ...

I re-wrote the chapter and I hope you like it. It took awhile and it's not much different but I hope you guys like it. :P

That's it?

This chapter is very interesting where did you get your ideas? I read Wicked Lovely by Melissa Marr and Paranormalcy by Kiersten White. I started getting into the faery mode ...

I just made the story to go along with this. Here's the link:

The family was new to the foster system, it was easy to see. They were still filled with smiles, warmth, and the hope of finding a new addition to their ...

Thanks, I actually love Melissa Marr. I had a feeling that the last paragraph was a bit choppy but thank you for your reaction KiroSevin.

I should have put this in the spoiler, but I leave it very vague so the reader could use their own imagination to find out what the Task is. I ...

I have left this short story with so little description for a reason so I could get the reviewers reactions and opinions to possibly make this story and lace it ...

I really love this novel of yours! It's painfully truthful and pretty darn close to real life situations I've been pushed in. I only have one nitpick this chapter and ...

Hey sher, I have a some nitpicks to point out and I'll highlight all my changes in red. You wonder why I am like this . . . Why I ...

Hey Psudiname, T here. So to start off I say I was therally impressed on your history and the background of the story that made it extremely belivable (The third ...

Thank you for the nitpicks! I have trouble editing but I knew something was off. Thank you for pointing out my errors and helping me towards a better future in ...