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Dude, I'm laughin my as-I mean butt off!

All I can answer is the first question and that is yes. I did not attend for this to be a "world class poem" I just intended to raise awareness ...

His selfishness is what made her cry, his self pity is what caused the water marks to appear on my shirt and a crying girl on my shoulder. Why? is ...

Umm . . . I think this should go in Lyrics. -T

Hey Chelse, T here. Actually something like this verse happened to one of my friends recently: Says he'll kill himself Just to see her cry Walks out the front door ...

I really like this poem! It explains writer's block perfectly. It's not too short but not too long. It almost has the impression of a writer who is writing this ...

You know, I wrote this in like three minutes. Gosh, I can't believe it's actually good. :( I was really angry at someone so I just was running on that ...

Watch. Monitor. Manipulate. Is that how your mind works? Annoy. Criticize. Destroy. Is it? Discriminate. Ignore. Forget. I thought I could trust you. Manipulate. Criticize. Forget. I thought you were ...

Hey WritersUnleashed, T here. I have to say this was a successful experiment. I've tried (and failed miserably) when it came to repetition in poetry, but this is very well ...

Tanta is Beck's last name. Beck Tanta. Confusing I know.

Beck Tanya stole my car keys once again. I thought I was going to kill her. She knew I was suppose to drive Lindsey home and that Tanya was suppose ...

Hey Shailz, T here. I was very confused by your poem. It didn't make much sense to me. Are you yelling at yourself or some one else? And I have ...

Wow! That is just on amazing poem! I loved the whole thing! I don't have any nitpicks but I have to admit I didn't think learnt was a word at ...

Thanks for reviewing you awesome people! Yeah, I know Jade is very dramatic but that is how I'm trying to portray her. She's based off my sis, kind of. I'm ...

I'm winging this book, it's gonna be fun Jade I hated school. There were too many of them, ghosts I mean. Always hovering around me and trying to drain me ...