TNOandXadric

So, may I ask about your favorite author, music, food, color, and animal? You may. Um... Favourite author? Argh. There are so many good ones. Possibly Terry Pratchett, possibly Victor ...

Generally, I like it. However, I agree with Zanna and Jetpack that you need to slow down and take some time to flesh out the characters, particularly in the first ...

What's Wyoming like? I've heard it's a nice place, good weather which is more than can be said for Indonesia. Oh, I love it... It's very beautiful, we live in ...

Very much an improvement on the original story. She still whines but at least it's done comically. Also- Utensil! I love it.

I, personally, enjoy creating perfect, god-modded characters, showing off their amazing Sue powers for three paragraphs, and then killing them in brutal, bloody ways. Then again I tend towards sadism ...

1. New Moon by Stephenie Meyer. Bella Sue does nothing but wangst and try to kill herself for five hundred pages. 2. Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer. Bella Sue does ...

Oh, my. That was wonderful. You not only managed to capture Bella Sue and Eddiekins perfectly, but you got the author right as well. As such, I present you with ...

...because who doesn't like to talk about themselves? Anyway. I am TNO. Also known as TNÖ because umlauts are awesome. TNO stands for The Nearly Omnipotent, a nickname I coined ...