TNG100

you are right. it is too short. it was not enough to satisfy my curiosity. the post leaves alot of unanswered questions and that is a good thing. questions keep ...

i loved the prologue. it kept me guessing the whole time. the part where the neighbors "decided to sing carols for us" is kind of confusing. was it around christmas? ...

i was a little confused at the beginning. are there people talking about the movie, or if not, i am confused at the random outbursts in the scene. the story ...

sounds captivating. i can not wait until you write more. i love how you start off the story with the sense of impending danger. i would love to here more ...

it was very mysterious and makes me want to read more. why does she have to keep it a secret? does she have epilepsy or can she walk into people's ...

i absolutely loved that it was science-fiction. the details were so descriptive that i felt that i was actually there. the beginning caught my attention and was written brilliantly. i ...

Prologue: My head still swam from the car accident that happened only moments ago. The accident didn't make any sense. There weren't any cars on the road and the car ...

i had originally read chapter two first, but now as i read the first chapter a lot of the things came together that i couldn't piece together in the second ...

I truly enjoyed reading every bit of this chapter. It kept me interested through and through. halfway through the chapter i realized that it was chapter two and not one, ...

sounds like a really great beginning for a story, book, novel, or whatever you want to turn this work into. it needs a little work in the communications department. some ...

"What is his name?" I shouted out into the silent crowd. I looked from face to face, and whenever I met their eyes they looked down not totally ashamed of ...

it sounded very interesting. near the very beginning where you said that it would be confusing, i have a question. it talked about the man running through this forest but ...

its absolutley awesome! it kept me interested from the begining and makes me crave more. what happens next? i wasn't board at all, and there were no dead spots. the ...

sounds like its going to be a great story. it flows very well and readers like that. they like action and emotion and anything that makes them itch to know ...

beautiful piece of work. you have a future in writing. :D