TNCowgirl

Crystal, the reason the paragraphs are all funny is cause I didn't want to hurt anyone's eyes. And she lives at a bar, any sort of weapon to her is ...

hahahahaha, me 'n Fred eh. Hmmmmm, he just asks way to many questions. :lol:

*She does, but i think that flew over most of their heads, Ara and Silvin weren't there when the stone was mentioned*

Zeri Zeri looked around, the thought that something could be out there that would hurt his sister was a very unnevering thought. "You wouldn't mind going some place else would ...

"Who are you?" Zeri asked the stranger. Zana looked up at the man and looked him over. He didn't look to much like a threat. "what happened to her?" Zana ...

"Why did they have to do that?" Ara sighed, she walked outside and looked around. "Now what do we do?" "Meet them where ever." Silvin said, "How do we figure ...

IT was really fun, i enjoyed it and thought it was amazing.

LOVE IT!!! Oh my goodness that was great!!!

*I'm lost, what is she supposed to believe???? Ugh, oh well* "Thanks," She tossed him the coin, but stayed seated. "Aren't you going after him?" Coal asked, "He'll be long ...

Alla Alla knelt down next to Kalilah and started helping Jhadi. "Good thinking," she wispered, Kalilah could barely hear her. She nodded and the women kept bustling around the room ...

Dido whaht ^Shadow said :P

Tiny looked at him, "How wouldn't you know when he left?" She demanded, something wasn't right. "I don't know," Sam said lowering his voice. "You know I keep my eyes ...

It is good, some of the sentences were kinda choppy, but other then that it was good. If you've got more I would deffinitly read it :D

Prologue "Honey, is that you?" a female voice called into the darkness. "Yes," came the reply, she turned around and saw her husband standing in the door way with a ...

"Not if we have everyone spread out and a few keep moving around." Alla replied, "That should work," Kalilah replied, "Whose a good actor?" Alla asked looking around, the boy ...