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Caralina--- Caralina bite her lip, that was far enough. She grabbed his hand pulling it back up onto the desk. Let's get this straight, I've known you for a day! ...

I feel really really bad. Because I promised this crit a while back. So here it goes. It was pretty good. Just my mind doesn't like big words and there ...

Caralina--- Caralina could feel the shivers run up her skin at his touch. She could feel his breath on her ear. She twirled the pencil faster, chewing on her lip ...

Caralina--- Caralina sat down still trying to grasp this. "Is there a teacher you can't convince to do something?" She whispered softly. She took her books and felt her hand ...

Caralina--- Caralina didn't know what to do when he took her books. She let him though and followed him towards the door. "Math." She smiled, "Hate, but have to have ...

Tyrant---- "He'll probably make it. He didn't seem like the dumb type, he would've found a way out." He tried to reassure her. He wasn't so sure though. The demons ...

***Ok, so I think she has an older brother. So if not just let me know. I forgot*** Caralina---- Caralina twisted her pencil around in her fingers for a few ...

Caralina--- Caralina was in the middle of reading the note when she felt his chair move closer. What was he trying to do? She forgot it and chewed on the ...

Falon---- Falon ran towards the town. She had slept in a tree the night before, but after a racoon started throwing a fit at her she decided it would be ...

Caralina--- Caralina wanted to look at the girl. Was she insane? She decided that the note needed a new subject. Why does that girl seem to want to get into ...

Colt---- Colt kissed the top of her head and sighed. "You know if we were a little more prepared I would say this would be a nice vacation." He smiled.

Colt--- Colt stood up, "I'll get it. YOu get reaquanted to your son." He smiled. He walked to the baby's room and moved the crib. He walked to the couch ...

***We will have a problem if they fight, because neither can win cause it will be a battle of the death.***

Colt---- Colt laughed, "I told him he would be grounded for the rest of his life if he did. Course he just laughed at that." Colt played with his son's ...

“Wanna dance?” He asked looking down at her. She had to look up, to see him, she was only a foot shorter then him. She was small for twenty-two, but ...