TNCowgirl

Caralina---- Caralina let him kiss her, "Why did she come back?" She asked, she wanted to make sure she had no grasp on Ryan, make sure his heart didn't want ...

Ok, so I reread everything so I could get a grasp on what was going on. It was good, there wasn't much that I could see that no one else ...

Wow, that was crazy!!!! There are several 'i's' that you need to capatilize. But other then that I didn't find too much that needed to be changed. It was quite ...

Colt---- Colt was surprised at her, he didn't expect this. When they pulled apart he just looked at her. "That was unexpected." He said softly.

Caralina---- Caralina leaned against him more. "Oh." She sighed softly. She didn't want to look at him afraid of what she might see. "D-D-do you still c-care for her?"

***ya, he's a dude*** Aren--- Aren looked over at the girl and his mind worked fiverously to try and remember her name. Tracy ! "Not much. Tracy, this is Audra, ...

Colt---- Colt had floated on clouds when her lips touched his. He pulled her face back to his own and kissed her softly, gently, and sweetly, not wanting to scare ...

Velna---- Velna grabbed Tim's arm. "Leave her alone before you get us both whiped." She growled in a low voice. "Remember, you don't have free run of this boat like ...

Colt---- Colt smiled as Tristan finished the cookie then crawled to the living room. (I dont' think he is old enough to walk yet) Colt kissed Caiden softly. "Life's wonderful, ...

Caralina---- Caralina laid her head on his chest not looking up at him. "Who was she?" She asked in a weak voice. She didn't want to see if he still ...

****Don't control how other people's characters act, please.***** Velna--- Velna rolled her eyes, TIm wasn't all that scary, course Velna had grown up with ship mates. She kept mopping as ...

Caralina---- Caralina didn't know what to say. "No." She just said leaning against him for support. *Tears*

Caleb---- Caleb smiled and stopped running his hands through his hair. "I see a beautiful girl, who doesn't think she's worth attention." He turned her face so he could look ...

Caralina--- Caralina leaned against him her courage finally coming back to her. "YOu don't want me to leave, Ryan, no way you want me to leave." The girl laughed. "HE ...

Colt--- Colt liked her laugh, it wasn't held back like most peoples. He smiled, "Thanks, means a lot." He wasn't kidding though he was afraid that she thought otherwise. He ...