TNCowgirl

Colt----- Colt spun towards the cabin and started towards it. "Amber and the hostages." He replied gruffly. He shoved the door open and looked around. Amber was standing stalk still ...

Caralina---- Caralina frowned, "Alright, you have to give me a back message later." She said a blush creeping up to her cheeks once she reliezed that he could think she ...

Colt--- "I never reliezed guys were such jerks." He smiled kissing the top of her head. "Cause you are beautiful." He tightened his hold on her holding her close and ...

Colt---- Colt looked at Tristan surprised, then Caiden. "Did you know about that?" She shook her head no. "WHen is James getting here, Angel?" "Anyminute." She replied. "Tristan you can ...

Colt--- "Yes, I do." He smiled. He wrapped his arms around her waist stopping htem in the middle of hte beach and looking over the ocean at the beautiful sunset. ...

Caralina--- Caralina chewed on her lip thinking. "How about.......you have to.....I don't know." She smiled pulling him closer to her and kissed him softly. "You think of a punishment."

Colt---- Colt frowned. "Tristan, does this mean he is trustworthy?" "Yea, more so then the last one." Tristan groaned. "Your still going." Colt said crossing his arms. "Why?" Tristan groaned, ...

Colt---- Colt worked on the story. Caiden and him had decieded to write down what happened to them in their free time, which was rare, but he had found some. ...

Caralina--- Caralina screamed in surprise then spun around. "Where were you?" She demanded. "You scared me to death. That wasn't cool."

Colt--- Colt smiled, "Good, cause I'd kill him for cutting our time together short." He smiled, "Come on, let's go walk on the beach."

Hey, if you want me to crit you work bump me. If I haven't done yours and you asked tell me if you still want me to do it.

Caralina---- Caralina smiled and splashed him back. She dove under the water and pulled him down smiling. She darted up to the top and climbed out waiting for him to ...

Colt--- Colt frowned. "Fine." He handed her the phone and crossed his arms. *tears*

Alright, you asked for a readers crit on all of your stuff. THis was the one that stood out that I wanted to read. My english teacher would mark all ...

Queen really as important has friendship? Maybe that is supposed to be as. I didn't catch to much, but where exactly is this going? So far the only plot I've ...