TNCowgirl

Tell that, tell how she was jerked awake. Was there a knock a phone call, a what?

What now? she That s is supposed to be capatile. was jerked awake the next morning . Jerked away by what?

Ok, so parts of it are choppy, parts aren't. Also, there are several different things you need to capatilize. Other then that please keep going. TNC

Twas good. I didn't really catch anything. I want to give you some tips though. When you have someone talk hit enter twice, least on here. It is easier on ...

Colt---- Colt nodded. "One thing though." "What?" She asked looking up at him. He pulled his shirt off, he had a wife beater under it. He wrapped it around her ...

I would've cried, but at the moment I can't. Stupid wisdom teeth. Anyways there was one thing in perticular that I noticed. [b]Me and Alex[/i] SHould be Alex and Me. ...

Velna---- Velna sighed, her dad probably thought she was dead. Long sense dead. She kept that to herself though. She looked around the room and finished her work humming in ...

Colt---- Colt shrugged. "Whatever we find, or whatever you want. YOu pick" he smiled. *tears*

Colt---- "Yes." He smiled. He followed her gaze to her brother then back. "Don't worry bout him, come on, let's go fid somethign to eat." He smiled pulling her with ...

Colt---- Colt hit the alarm clock with his fist and winced. He got up, showered, got dressed and went outside. He looked around and finally spotted Aurora. he walked slowly ...

Colt---- Colt squeezed her hand and smiled down at her. "See you in the morning." He said when they got to her room. He bent down and kissed her softly. ...

Wow, that was amazingly good. Please keep going, you can't just stop there and not have explained everything. I demanded you keep going or else.....or else......I don't know what I'll ...

Colt---- "No thanks needed, he deserved it." He smiled kissing her softly. "Don't worry about him. He won't mess with you again, and if he does he'll regret it." He ...

Colt----- Colt slammed his fist into the guys stomach sending him to the ground double over. "Don't tell me what I wont do." He squatted down. "Now, I see you ...

Alana----- "I can fire a gun, I'll be fine." Alana said trying to convince Drake,"If you don't let me go wtih you I'll go by myself." She crossed her arms ...