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Name: Catty Age: 15 Personality: She is sweet, and too trusting for her own good. She is very cautious though at times. And has a huge temper which tends to ...

Ok, well there wasn't really anything in it that needed to be changed. It was good. Left us at a really really mean cliffhanger. I want to know what he's ...

***Jamie, I claim Alex. :P***

Kaleb: Kaleb nodded, "Yup, last year until I get out of here." He replied looking the kid over. After years of having to read people he could tell his smile ...

***Ya, he's still in the school, I didn't think of that. But ya, he is.*** Dusty: Dusty let him help her up then smiled. "It's ok, I really should've been ...

***Someone bring my people in.*** Name: Kaleb Age: 18 Element: Earth Personality: Sweet, protective. He can have a temper like his sister, and he doesn't get pushed around. Weapon/Gift: He ...

Ghost, your supposed to wait to start! name- Kaleb age- 16 going on 17 gender- Male race-Storm Caller (One of the triplets) appearance- Him, just without the weird feet and ...

That was good. Just put a comma in front of the fan boys For (I think it's for) And Nor But Or Yet So MOST of the time you put ...

Caralina: Caralina looked at him and tried to smile, but she couldn't she was to tired. "Hi." She whispered softly.

Colt: "Nope, she wasn't." he smiled down at her. "It's like comparing dirt to a gem." he smiled kissing her forehead. and your the gem. *tears*

Tim: "Nope." He smiled. "WHAT!" She demanded. "Well, you see. Now you know where I live, and there's the whole issue of having a pack at you becking call." He ...

Wow good. I'll leave a better crit later when my brain isn't fried. Nudge me to do so. TNC

Colt: "Nope." He laughed. "Come on, let's go swimming." *tears*

Tim: Tim didn't know what to say. It was insane. He crossed his arms and ran a hand through his hair. "That's crazy." He sighed. *tears* Angel: Angel leaned against ...

Colt: Colt looked at the waitress. "Our check." He replied looking back at Aurora and not focusing his attention on the waitress anymore then he had to. "We'll get out ...