TNCowgirl

Tim: Tim fought the urge to do as she implied, her blood was quite tempting. "That's not funny, or fair." He hissed walking over to where the books were and ...

Colt: Colt pulled on his black wife beater (Tank top in guy terms :P) and a pair of jeans. He walked back into the room and stopped stiff, his eyes ...

Colt: Colt frowned. "WHy do you keep doing that. You would look amazing covered in mud." He smiled. "So, stop saying you don't." He kissed her softly then pulled away ...

Angel: Angel clamped her hand over her mouth and whimpered. Why did she always have to talk so much. Now he would leave. "I'm sorry." She muttered softly doubting he ...

Try breaking this up in half. People will crit it because it is shorter. Tell me when you do though. All you need to do is take off half and ...

Colt: Colt walked behind her while she was looking in the mirror and wrapped his arms around her resting his chin on her shoulder. "No." He smiled. "Just don't give ...

Kaleb: "Fine." he replied as they walked into the town. "And I'll tell you about myself, though there isn'tmuch to tell." *Tears*

Colt: "You lie to yourself to much. I don't think I want you leaving in this outfit you look so amazing." He said looking her over again. Amazing was an ...

Tim: "But I know how to keep from doing that." He replied. And if I don't watch it I will get there. "YOu can do the same." He looked at ...

Angel: "I remember, I also remember what he said about Vampires too. Well he was wrong!" SHe repleid. "They aren't all the same, every now and then there is a ...

Colt: Colt stood up and walked around her. "I think you need to change." He smiled. "WHAT! Why?" She asked looking a little nervous. "Cause, your gonna make me have ...

Tim: "No, he is wrong. If you were an enraged, man-killing monster, you wouldn't have helped us." He replied. He walked her into the house and sat her in a ...

Kaleb: Kaleb looked down at her and frowned. "YOu don't have to come if you don't want to." He replied glancing at her hands and back at her face. "I'm ...

I'll read this when you fix a problem. When writing dialog you do this. "Hi, my name is Beth." The girl smiled. I turned around and looked at her. "I'm ...

Tim: Tim frowned at the fairy. "Yes, and I should've left Angel to be killed too." TIm hissed at him. "just because she is a different race, doesn't mean I ...