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  • Archive Re: Shifting Times

    Chevy took a deep breath and leaned back. "Listen, I'm takin all this one day at a time. I'm not planning kids any time soon. To tell you the truth, ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Soldier and The Thief

    "I'm not really sure." He said looking down at her. "I don't like the orphanage, and there's something else. I'm still workin on figuring that one out." he replied. "Let ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Shifting Times

    Chevy chuckled. "It's fine, Layton, yes. It doesn't take much to live here even if I wasn't making millions." He repleid. "Making millions?" Her dad eyed him. "That's an exaduration, ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Soldier and The Thief

    "You know what, I've helped you when i didn't need to. If I showed that little girl an mercy then they might think I was on your side!" He hissed. ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Shifting Times

    Leal leand against him wanting to rip their throats out. She never wanted to talk about her parents. they weren't worht the dirt they walked on. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Che

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Soldier and The Thief

    Tyrel tapped his foot. "Always stealing aren't you?" He asked. "What's it to you?" She demanded grabbing more bread. "So, why don't you make your own bread? He asked. "I ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    he decided not to mention that she had that same reason the day before. "I love you." He said softly. "I always will, even after you told me what happened."

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    "Alright, please don't go back and meet Marco." He said softly. "I don't plan on it." She replied. He smiled and kissed her softly. **UGH, all i had**

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    He sighed and nodded walking into the shower. When he finished taking a shower he went downstairs and just watched her cook. "Did you mean everything you said last night?" ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Soldier and The Thief

    Tyrel felt like he had been kicked over and over. He took a deep breath and sat up. For some reason he felt like he had been kicked in the ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    He nodded and hugged her. "Ok, I need a shower, i smell." "No you don't." She laughed. "I'll be out in a minute." He said kissing her softly.

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Shifting Times

    Leal smiled and looked through her menu spotting somethign she wanted then sitting it down. "So, what can I get y'all to eat?" The waistress asked. "Water for me." She ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    ***That's fine*** Colt sighed, he needed a shower. He started up the stairs and stopped when he saw her. "You stayed." He said softly. "Thank God!" ***All I had***

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Soldier and The Thief

    Tyrel cleared his throat from behind hte bowing girl. She jumped spinning around. "Hello." He said stepping towards her and grabbing her arm. The little girl stopped clapping and frowned ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Starstruck

    Colt finally got the guts to go inside. He carried the groceries inside and put them in the kitchen and pantry. He felt like being shot when he didn't see ...

    Dec 28, 2008


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