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Re: Actors (scenes 1-10)
I should just briefly talk about the stand-up comedy routines in this screenplay and why some people won’t find it funny. Frederik is a master at insult comedy and he ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Song I Heard In A Dream
These are some good words. Your rhymes are good and I like that style. I personally think the chorus is too short, but I guess it’s to produce some sort ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
Very lovely words, Emalily. I pretty much agree with WaywardBird. And I also like the way you’ve structured it and your writing style. :)
Jan 26, 2011
