TDMitchell

hehehe VousExEtonnant, you are one sneaky character. Sneaky, mischievous, and rather clever if I can admit. You have successfully and bravely summed up human psychological behaviour in this down-to-ea

ALL W&M: Timothy David Mitchell To see Your face means everything, The way You captivate my heart. To see You smiling down on me ‘cause You’re in love with who ...

[continued from part 2] I know that people don’t like reading long pieces on here, so I am only going to post 10 scenes at a time on here. I ...

[continued from part 1] I know that people don’t like reading long pieces on here, so I am only going to post 10 scenes at a time on here. I ...

I should just briefly talk about the stand-up comedy routines in this screenplay and why some people won’t find it funny. Frederik is a master at insult comedy and he ...

A nicely put together piece. It does have some emotional elements to it. But I’m a bit confused - is the main character in this piece actually an adult whose ...

This is very good. Not a bad start for a poem. Really, there is actually very little I can say about this regarding improvement on this. It’s not a bad ...

What a fascinating piece. Bring to mind the world from the film WALL-E . A good insight into the future, a very post-apocolyptic view of the future. The stanza about ...

Wow, wow, wow. Wow. ... Wow... What a dark, dark, dark poem indeed. This is probably the first poem I’ve ever read about emo-activity. I can’t help but to say ...

I personally don’t have a goal. I’m just simply gonna review as many as I can just for the sake of getting my points up. I will admit that days ...

Hmmm.... Well, you’ve certainly captured the depressive nature of the poem. And I’d be happy to buy you a happy meal any old time. :) One thing I will say ...

This is a very amusing piece, I must say. I also have to admit that as I read certain lines of this poem, certain film titles actually jumped out at ...

What a sad poem. But what an even amazing ending which brings his poem out of the lowest pits of despair in the same way that the character of this ...

I personally disagree with Knightly. I say keep the rhymes, because the rhymes in this piece manage to hold the poem together nicely, as opposed to other poems which just ...

This is a good poem. I like your short 2-sentance verses, but maybe that could be worked upon. You've captured the good times in this piece and you've obviously put ...