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Hey, I'm back ^-^ (Dear God, I'm using anime emotes) This computer still doesn't translate quotation marks and hyphens, so I'll do the generosity of changing them myself whenever I ...

so a month after I started seventh grade they put a bunch of money in a bank a nd told them to let me have so much a month I'm ...

I'll start off by saying that I haven't read chapter 1 or the prologue. The reason is you seem to have gotten enough reviews already, and anything I'd have to ...

At this point I don't really know what the novels about or what makes it a fantasy, not that what I said is much of a criticism. I don't find ...

I suppose the point of the story was to indicate that death and darkness are integral parts of the universe, and despite being underrated, are not necessarily evil or less ...

I waited a moment or two to slow m y breathing I leaned over to the nightstand and fumbled for my glasses comma cutting my finger on the edge of ...

I haven't read "And All This But Mere Perceptions", but I'll tell you what I think and what I understand. had been fresh out of grey wolf, and would not ...

Welcome to YWS! There's a couple of things you should know first. 1) You need two reviews for every story you submit. That means you should review two stories right ...

Groesbeck flicked the light switch and released the floodgates of light Floodgates...maybe it's just me, but what's that? I looked it up and the dictionary says 1. A gate used ...

Kylan's advice about starting in the middle of the action is really good, as is a lot of the other advice you received. I didn't see any grammar or spelling ...

Yeah, you should do two reviews now to compensate for the story you submitted. Anyway, on to the review! “The midnight blue ones . Y ou should know that” “by ...

Yeah, you got some really good reviews. I don't know if there's anything I can cover that hasn't been covered already, but I'll read your story and give it a ...

A curse upon the spider-mark The ink that creeps beneath our skin The brand that makes us who we are: A blight to those “untouched by sin…” Yeah, you should ...

“I do , but I’m too tired to get up right now. Since Amelia was only in grade seven she’ll be staying at her old school when Ryan moves on ...

I had hidden behind yester day for half an hour I felt awkward in my [s]skirt and [/s]shirt that was the same color as the roses in the pattern on ...