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Re: Aliens!
It seems very lighthearted. Probably could make a good children's book, from what I read. But they're right, it is cliched. Find a way to twist the cliches. The cliches ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Rise of the Resistance (chapter one revised)
I'd continue writing if I were you. Robots VS Humans is nothing new, but you it may possible to make the story interesting without overusing cliches. I don't know all ...
Jul 13, 2008
