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Science-fantasy. It has elements of science-fiction (space-ships, laser guns), and elements of fantasy (Magic). When a story possesses futuristic and unscientific concepts simultaneously, it's a scien

Ms. Hallie is still tending to Ms. Patterson,” the doctor said as they boarded the helicopter. There are two doctors in this scene. You may want to consider telling the ...

Once upon a time in a small, tiny, miniscule, petite, insignificant town there was a small, tiny, miniscule, petite, insignificant pebble. The pebble was magical and glowed all the bright, ...

The shadows stood behind me - watching my every move while the light stood in front of me criticizing my face. The punctuation in this sentence is awkward and your ...

No, it was more beautiful than gold. Perhaps the king had ordered a special material, a mixture of gold and diamond maybe, and built his castle out of it. Whatever ...

Hey, I'm back. ^-^ Remember me? At this rate, I may stick around until the story's finished ;) Anyway, on to the review. He could, for that brief moment when ...

(I did not expect to see myself frequenting the Romance board this much.) The river moved through the forest like a vein winding through an arm. The colors contrasted each ...

Okay, so i have a plan for a prequil to my current novel Prequ e l. The only reason I corrected your mistake is because you're a writer. If you ...

Both of my sisters participate in swimming, Tiger :) I'm a big fantasy fan, but the only author I noticed that you listed was JK Rowling. I don't read much ...

Once upon a time, I believed there was more to life than social standing. This phrase irritates the living fire out of me. I think it's more of a personal ...

I tried to ignore his constant torrent of complaining while I shot up aliens in Halo. Although this paragraph is certainly written well, I would consider changing the reference to ...

It was a mandatory course that took up most of an elf’s life and then we would use our training in the battlefield until we died or most likely killed. ...

All right, another fantasy lover! If you don't mind me asking, what type of fantasy do you like reading the most? Anyway, I might as well talk about some other ...

Penguin is right, his style of speech just isn't suitable for a teenage. If he was a thirty year-old man, than perhaps. I personally didn't mind the tone, but I ...

I have one word to say, Father Grigori change the comma into a colon. How foolish it all is, you trust a person then, they turn on you This isn't ...