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Helloooo! Synne here to review this :) Overall I think this is pretty good - I completely didn't expect the ending! My advice to make this better would be to ...

@ Celtica and tr3x: I don't understand how this would work.... it sounds like it would be pretty complicated to draw together all the ideas into something coherent =/

Hi everyone! I'm thinking of starting an online webcomic as a way of improving my drawing and PSE skills, but I've come to a slight hitch in plans. I have ...

Hello~ I feel like I've been neglecting all your works recently, and i'd been meaning to review this for a while but I guess I ended up forgetting ... =/ ...

Hi guys! This is what I've been working on for the past few days, so I just wanted to see if I could get any feedback from it (particularly on ...

I'm waiting for the other members of the travelling group too :(

Jacob "Are you-" I hesitated, then stopped speaking, standing there like a bit of an idiot as Juli curled up against the wall, her small frame shaking with tears. A ...

No worries, you kept him in character so it's not really an issue :) Just trying to work out how best to reply but it will either be tomorrow or ...

I like the third one :D Just writing up my reply; it should be up today or tomorrow.

Our wagon, sylver? Saukko The wagon shook with the force of the storm, and I curled up tighter under my sheet, praying for the days when we could sleep under ...

Saukko As I left the forest in a rush, I managed to scramble back into the wagons and try and look as inconspicuous as possible before the brothers returned. Elijah ...

Saukko | Kathryás "Everyone set up camp while Harold and I discuss our next move." With that, Joe dragged his brother to the forest, for the two of them to ...

Hi, synne here :) From just a first quick read, I think one thing you really need to sort out is the formatting; some of the paragraphs, especially the last ...

Name: Saukko Hattonen Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Human Class: Traveller/Scholar Kingdom/Alliance: Technically Ronas, but usually maintains a more neutral standpoint. Appearance: Saukko is slightly abo

Jacob "Looks like some sort of fire." I suggested, my eyes meeting Juli's as she turned. As our gazes met, something changed in her expression, and there was a long ...