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Re: Motel 66 (chapter 6)
Oh my gosh at the end! First time I've ever felt sorry for a prostitute. He studied Reni with blank eyes. What are you up to Reni? She stared right ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Coffee
Thanks for the corrections jasmine
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Coffee
Thanks owl. You know how I like to rhyme. And beccalicous. Corny coffee pun. I liked it.
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Misery At It's Finest
Excellent poem! I loved it. It made perfect sense to me, maby because I feel just like this sometimes. That’s what I wish for Times of real living and breathing ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Coffee
Black and bitter. White and sweet. I drink you with my morning treat. Coffee, oh coffee made of nuts and full of caffeine. Coffee, oh coffee Your surface shimmers and ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: The Other Side of the Fire
Are you going to make this into some sort of Novel/short story? I hope you do. With that tiny paragraph you captured my attention. It sounds like something I would ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Patchy
Very sad and beautiful. I had to read it a couple times to make sense of it, but I guess that means its good. I always have trouble understanding a ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: The After
In the after, my soul swims in the heavens, and flies in the river. I fall into the abysmal sky, free-falling into bliss. No more pain, no more hunger, no ...
Apr 22, 2011
