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  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: Keep Driving

    Hi! This is a good piece of work. I see a lot of writers go for the short and clipped style of narration, and very few manage to make it ...

    Oct 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Albus

    Hi! Overall, a solid piece. You're descriptive, using both stark-simple and toothy words with aplomb. It comes across as an advanced work without being overbearing or complex for the sake ...

    Oct 16, 2017


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