Swottielottie

Loved it That is all i can say I havn't a clue what you were talking about but nethertheless I loved it! Charlotte

I like the imagery in this poem There are a few things you could improve but all in all it is a very deep, profound poem I really really wish ...

I've scraped this poem now because I was so bored when writing this and couldn't think of what to write I know its rubbish but thanks anyway charlotte

No I love school but I hate some of the pupil if you get my drift thanks for the comments though Charlotte

I love this sad poem i 'm not sure what its about but then again i wasn't reading it prorperly charlotte xxxx

ooooh! I like this one! your style is cool keep on writing!!! review my poems please!!!! charlotte

So sad...But I like sad poems I think abortions are wrong too you really spoke from the heart writing that Sorry if it sounds corny! Charlotte xxx

I like the poem Nice use of metaphors On an ocean of unhappiness. From thunderous clouds of guilt and shame, Falls a relentless helplessness, I like that above bit Charlotte ...

I like the poem its rather sad and frustrating but its good I wish i could right like that my poem ( demons ) Is a bit rubbish. Meaningless gestures, ...

thanks is the new one any better?

I agree with everyone else but I thought it was quite a good poem What exactly was the subjs=ect beacause I didn't really understand it it had a nice feel ...

Love the words and the flow I don't really understand what your talking about except death i think but I'm only 13 so you know.... great poem though just great

School is hell on earth Teachers are winged monsters they talk my head into the ground badger me with constant questions Other children, firery demons Black and pink dragon with ...

We all die everntually, I guess but the ultimate question is why and what happnes after that. I mean everyone wants to know what the meaning of life is, don't ...

Hi everyone, I'm Charlotte, but if you want you can call me Swottielottie. I just joined this site yesterday and I don't know what to do. Can someone review my ...