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I think this poem is quite good although it needs more information and description. who is telling the story, where are they going, what is the star expressway? The best ...

Is that a joke? no offence but if you seriously think that is good... welli can't talk my writing is hardly professional

ok. I thought I was weird but you are a whole new level. funny poem though... please be serious next time but u may have started a new style of ...

Another success!

aaaaaaagh! its not fair! you can write so much better than me nice and short too good work nah !Excellente trabaja! I may be crazy but I know spanish hehehehehe ...

Cool Cool Cool Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this poem!!!! What are you writing a book about? I always start novels but nver finish them. Bets bit in this poem was "A weapon, ...

Give piepiemann22 a break guys! This is quite a cool poem, well i think it is anyway And there is a point to it, I think you are saying that ...

this is the worst poem I ever wrote so I agree that is is rubbish

_ I started off as heaps of air; hot anger _ and cold dreams, good and bad Floating gently in the sky watching the town below. Then one day I ...

Good bit of writing BUT not really a poem I'd put it into the story or prose bit whatever they call it good idea though I like anything creepy and ...

Her words burn like fire, the hatred she has ommited sticks as glue to my memory bank of hurting words I delve into the creaking shelves of haunting dialogues and ...

Thanks soldier boy jack but I think you're wrong it was so rubbish but thannks anyway charlotte

I know what you mean ,sunshine girl I don't really write poem's very much, I'm more of a novel/ short story girl but Why are some people on this site ...

iI know it was a rubbish poem but I was just trying things out No need to get mad brad! hey that rhymes!

Poem deleted Sorry everyone, although this was rubbish anyway