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Hi tie dye hero (what is that all about?) Welcome to YWS! We are being invaded by TW! Does that mean your an alien? PM me if you have any ...

I liked it! It was a good way of approaching a risky topic. Just a few things, I didn't like the way you kept saying fattening me with lies, the ...

Thank you very much! I will try and edit it soon! Charlotte

Welcome to YWS! I think this iste is a lot easier to navigate than TW, but thats my opinion. Feel free to PM me with any questions! Bye Charlotte

Does anyone like this? If you have any improvements just tell me! I need some advice on what to do with this story. Charlotte

Thank you! I replied to your welcome post in the welcome forum! Glad to see your getting used to yws already! Charlotte

Hello! Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions just PM me. I'm sure you will enjoy it here at YWS, we are a very friendly bunch! What sort of ...

Thank you Jules! You comment did make me happy! I don't usuallly write love poems but I wanted to try a sonnet. Thanks Charlotte Very funny signature!

Hi Firearris! Welcome to YWS. You can PM me if you have any questions. I love writing fantasy too. Finally! A girl on this site my age! look forward to ...

Hello Jessica, and welcome to YWS. Just PM me if you have any questions, I am happy to help. You should have more confidence, I'm sure you are a great ...

Hi Stephen. Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions just PM me, I'm happy to help. Remember to post a few critiques before you submit any work. Also, I ...

I like the last two and the first three were hillarious. Someone should write a funny book of funny haikus. Weird, but whenever I read haikus the voice in my ...

very cute and funny 8/10

9/10 quite funny but not really funny.

A story I wrote at a writing club. Undead There is a dull numbness in me A scream rings in my ears But I feel nothing. I feel no joy ...