Swottielottie

“Should I throw a bucket of water over her to make sure? Then she’ll dise-, dispa- disaper-“ “Disappear?” corrected Ellima, patting Fuchsia’s golden hair. Fuchsia blushed and smiled. “I

1,017. Nearly there!

411, lame I know. I can't stop editing. HELP!

I 've only written 411 words today and I'm soooo tired of this story already. Hopefully I might get to the target.

The bodies lay frozen across the marble floor. A silvery glow hung in the air, which mingled with the overpowering stench of death.

Ok, thanks I'll change it but..... as you can see poems aren't really my thing.

Wow, I love this sort of abstract stuff. There was a copuple of tense changes, but the others have already mentioned it. Very cool, but look for grammar and tense ...

Why thank you, just_intoxicated, but I am not a pretty decent writer. when i say I speak spanish, I'm not complety fluent but i know a quite a lot. See ...

Hi, You might know me already as I've been on this website for a while (I think) but I'm Swottielottie or Charlotte. Even though I've been on this website for......... ...

Hi Emily. I just read your post. I'm also very nervous, although you wouldn't know it. You remind me of victor from corpse bride. In the best possible way of ...

Title: I dunno yet Genre: fantasy Summary: Two sisters Ellima and Fuschia are orphans. Ellima returns after an afternoon with her friend luthando to find the orphanage being ravaged by ...

7/10 Short and memorable

I think I would like to meet: 1.Claudetten (she's amazing) 2. Snoink (she is a legend) 3.Poltergiest ( he's cool) 4.Kitty15 (shes ...wow!) 5. Nate (cos he made the best ...

Damn! I wnated to hug victor! Granted but he suddenly realises he hates writing and stops making books and all his fans stomp on you. (sorry) I wish I was ...

Granted, but it sets you on fire and your hairs falls out (sorry pol). I wish all the character in Corpse Bride were real (except the parents and barkis)