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Kevin? Hobbies:Writing, Piano, , clarinet, drawing, listening to music, making films Place: London General Attitude: Erm, I worry a lot and am quite pessimistic

well, you kinda said what u look like already but, here's what I thought with out looking at what you wrote. Female, 15, green eyes and long blonde hair. Totally ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

I liked this. I could hear the characters in my head and it seemed so real. But I agree that you need to describe the surroundings more so the reader ...

Thank you Paw Print, your reply meant so much to me. It is certainly NOT perfectly written but thank you for saying it. I've edited this a lot more but ...

Second part of the first chapter... enjoy!) Ellima quickly brushed her long brown hair and fixed her small tiara on with a clip. It dug into her head. Why did ...

Well, thanks for taking the time to read some of it. I'm glad you liked the dialogue, as I thought that it was my weakest point in writing. I'll try ...

Yay! Pirates of the caribbean reference! Yo he me hearties! My only tip for you is WRITE A PIRATE SONG, whether the pirates are bloodthirsty or mearly scallywags, you cannot ...

Welcome Zero! Nice username. I completely understand what you mean. There is no one in my class that likes writing either... I know you will love this site as it ...

Hello Joe! Welcome to YWS! Home to the best writing on the net... Well, in my opinion anyway! So... Write two critiques and then you can start posting your work. ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you will love it here! Well as people have said before have a look over the rules and you'll be fine! Austrialia, eh? Cool. Well, ...

Welcome Back!

My longest was about 22,000 but I was only halfway through the story. I say around 30,000+ is a novel.

I have loads at home, but I rarely bring them with me. I just scibble on my hand or just remember it. But I love drawing ideas on bits of ...

I'm not so sure about that JFW1415, I think I think that my characters are real.