Swottielottie

Hello! This thread certainly is popular :D, I wonder why, eh? (The quality of reviews, obviously) Could you review the first (and if you can, the second too) chapter of ...

Rosey Unicorn you are amazing! I was not expecting such a detailed response, thank you so much. I'll take into account all your ideas, especially the advertising part. Thank you ...

Hey, everyone. I've got an idea for a book in which a set of laws are passed in the UK during the near future that are supposed to stem overpopulation ...

I've read this a few times and it's very haunting. The description at the beginning is lovely, I like the repetition. I can't think of anything technical to improve really, ...

I agree with the above review. I really enjoyed the description, your word choice and the build up to the girl finding her brother on the floor. The repetition at ...

She felt foolish checking the pulse of a man whose neck she had just snapped but there was an inhumanity in the way he fought that made her cautious. I ...

Banned for being so old on YWS.

Not quite finished, just wondering whether I should continue and if anyone has any ideas. Thanks in advance. Her - 12th December I’ve often wondered if death is anything like ...

Thanks Jet and Rosey, that really helped, I'll try and take all that into account. (Now I remember why I love YWS)

I was thinking of beginning my novel with the death of the main character's best friend. What would you say are the good and bad points of this decision? Also, ...

When I was about 11, my class was reading a book with a character called Lottie, so as my name is Charlotte, they all called me that. My best friend ...

To dear Miss Charlotte, (I'm afraid I never did know your full name, so I apologise profusely) I have often wondered why my life is the way it is. To ...

Firstly, wow! I've read both parts of this story and I feel myself becoming addicted! Your style is so intricate, but simple at the same time. Fabulous description; I can ...

YAY! *Bows down to the awesomeness of our beloved webmaster* I'll tell you when/if it's fixed. Thank you! EDIT: It's absolutely fine now! Thanks again!

I'm so sorry Nate! When I try to access the homepage, the page simply says: General Error SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ] Data too long for column 'brwsr_uagent' at row ...