Swires

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Continued.... Phoryell ran his fingers through his hair, thinking, thinking. He knelt down to the body, and placed his hands over it. Slowly the flesh vanished leaving a skeleton. A ...

Thankyou. Snoink: Ignored post, feel free to review the story. The post is just a mistake i made.

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lol, Ive ordered the other 2 off amazon, should be coming soon. Also her new book Priestess of the White and Last of the Wilds.

Yes, this is pretty good. I can see Poor Imp has corrected most of the mistakes. Well done and keep up the writing.

Thasnkyou for the edit, I have made the corrections and deeply appreciate your comments. ____ Chapter 4 – Nightly Chills Fyrne shivered underneath his thin purple robes. He looked up ...

*sigh* Im warning the admins about you, your attitude is almost laughable. Calm down a little. And for the record, typo-free doesnt make you a good writer, Im clumsy with ...

Okay Gaia, you're going to need to adopt a better attitude. If you were expecting people to say: "Oh my god, that was literary perfection. DO NOT change a single ...

You should post, whats the worst that could happen? Reviewers review and improve your writing. Itsw a win win situation.

Get rid of the prologue, its not necessary and add spacing. Then I shall return.

anyone?

Chapter 3 – Magery Fyrne stood in a circle of fellow mages, looking up at the older men and then down at his 15 year old hands. They bore looks ...

Very funny. its necessary not necesary Never Eat Cakes Eat Salmon Sandwiches And Remain Young. Good job!