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FOr me, purposeful fragments are ok, they add depth to create tension etc... and they are really useful techniques to use.

I had forgotten this was here! I'm really glad you posted this, though, Sam. This stuff is all very helpful. I'm pretty decent at dialogue (which is lucky since my ...

Yes, I can see where you are coming from with this Snoink, I tend to go into explain mode when im doing a world building scene.

Really nice article, it will be helpful when I come to crit.

Its based in a fantasy world.

yes imps version sounds good.

Thanks. Looks like the Mauve Eye will be my next project then, I need to slow down the beginnning a little though

They dont seem common at all. I didn't know ypu read Mauve Eye Imp?

I have just started a witchhunter story and after doing some research there doesnt seem to be alot of witch hunter stories outthere. does the idea sound original?

These are interesting points.

Thanks. Thanks for sharing too crysi.

I wrote this for my blog It took me around a month to work out what plotting worked, when I first joined YWS as you know I had difficulty with ...

I ran it through google translater and it came out gibberish: Shrimp that not nothing lolleba the cascade

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The golden ratio is 1.618 and is basically obtained from rational distances of shapes Also this Golden ratio is "the rule of nature" by measuring and dividin certain parts of ...