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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Annie is NOT proper drama it is an over exaggerated musical. its not a good thing to start with as there is little drama actually

Im usually pretty good at plucking names out of nowhere, I dont usually go into any great length for names.

The way magic works in my new world is through something called the aura. The aura is a concentration of magic, it is more dense in parts and allows sorcerers ...

Well maybe he coupld simply have the stereotypes: Blurred vision, stumpling over everywhere, bad reactions.

Nice tip, I usually just diev straight into the action with my first paragraphs. Or if not its the setting to get myself into the story.

See my blog entry, Plotting the Motivational Way

Characters are the things that I struggle with, they are sort of side ons at the moment to the world and story. BUt I havea really good character now which ...

I have an OCD but it isnt a good one, my mind forces me to wash my hands about 50 times a day, if I come into aocntact with any ...

What you are suggesting Teeeo is a little cliched. Probably the best thing to do would be not to kill the MC, you are the writer and only you can ...

OR how about, from a fantasy point of view. THe Mafia discovers magic!

Or how about technified classical remixes! There are some good websites out there for that kind of thing.

Yes, I am sometimes aq vague critiquer also, I really need to get back into the swing of long crits.

Some cool tips there David, thankyou for the music refs

Yeah, you ve got to choose the right genre for the scene you are righting, like a harsh battle might be as fishr said, some metal or hard music.

Thankyou for the comments, I wrote it for people having the same blockades as me. I think it is really motavational.