Swires

Havnt read, but sound intriguing.

Lol - why are we even debating this lol?

I like the first one, I dont know what the hell is happening with the second one, the third one is also good. nice work.

Derren uses both to kill animals after many many attempts at sneaking up on them. He eats the meat cold with his bare hands, then he would leave trails of ...

"Open spaces, ive been locked up for too long" - Derren. If you were a software program, what would it be? I.e Word, Excel ...

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Well he wouldnt post it if he didnt do it lol. Yeah its really good art.

"A simple Doctor in the lore of Magic" - Rosin To air is human, to forgive divine. How far do you agree with the above?

"No, not really" - Derren What is the meaning of life?

"kread is my alter ego, even though this thought is but a fracture of my heart for it is but a trifle of my common demon hood" - Scall. Question: ...

Maybe a tad too passive, not hitting enough. Although there is an element of intrigue. Space, Time and Nuclear War

I like it!

I see chapters as just a natural way to end a certain part of the story. I like to think of Chapters basically just for reading practicality but some people ...

Gandalf is a likable Hero, I admit. He ranks high on the likability list.

Thankyou for all the praise. Not to nitpick, but I didn't praise, I constructivley critiqued. If we are nitpicking - il join in. I may not have been talking about ...