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Some cool tips there David, thankyou for the music refs

HI everyone, Hi Kay. Yes there is more of Hells tools for me to force on you all lol!

Yo man, whoop dawg back in da house..... Or Hello, welcome back!

YAY! I remember you, I think you commented on my work once, welcome back.

Welcome home, hope you stay on generation 2 -- Yes for some reason ive taken upon myself to name YWS generation 2...oh welll. lol

Welcome ANI, I dont remember you from generation 1 of YWS, but Im sure well be chatting on the forums pretty soon. Have a good time here.

No I dont, but yes the switch was masterful

Yeah, you ve got to choose the right genre for the scene you are righting, like a harsh battle might be as fishr said, some metal or hard music.

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Thankyou for the comments, I wrote it for people having the same blockades as me. I think it is really motavational.

FOr me, purposeful fragments are ok, they add depth to create tension etc... and they are really useful techniques to use.

I had forgotten this was here! I'm really glad you posted this, though, Sam. This stuff is all very helpful. I'm pretty decent at dialogue (which is lucky since my ...