Swires

Bonjour!

Right, please tell me what the point of you posting your story was if you dont want feedback on how to improve your story and in turn make you a ...

See my blog entry, Plotting the Motivational Way

Get rid of the prologue, its not necessary and add spacing. Then I shall return.

IT seems very fun and original. Ill bew linking to it on a few forums

Right, I have a few things: 1) It would be nice to be able toa access a members portfolio from the member view page and not kjust from one of ...

Characters are the things that I struggle with, they are sort of side ons at the moment to the world and story. BUt I havea really good character now which ...

Hi ANI. I have a feeling that ideas will be floating around for the Mauve Eye for a good other half a year.

no I dont either WOO with Gazza!

When I started Hells Tools it was the only time I had done an outline to a story. Im posting it here just to see if I actually did it ...

anyone?

I have an OCD but it isnt a good one, my mind forces me to wash my hands about 50 times a day, if I come into aocntact with any ...

Over YWS' absense I have written 20 000 words of a dark fantasy called Hell's Tools. I probably wont be carrying on as my writing has improved since the start ...

like the idea of your Story Kay, it seems like an interesting concept and slightly dark. Id like to read it.

What you are suggesting Teeeo is a little cliched. Probably the best thing to do would be not to kill the MC, you are the writer and only you can ...