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Yesterday, I completed for the first time arguable the first and finest fantasy epic of all time. I stopped in the middle of the two towers for about 6 months ...

Ok, some general comments as a watchful reader I made. 1) Elayna's POV was nicely done, I got a real sense of reality of your world and character through her. ...

I think my writing is better in first, my third person is always a little boring and laborious to read.

I can build one mean world. So "other."

When I started writing longer stories I went in head first and barracaded thousands of words into the story. Can you guess what happened? The story became blander that an ...

Plotting is often considered a hard, boring and perilous task to complete by writers both young and old. Many writers find themselves buried in maps, character sheets and plot outlines ...

An old HP RPG, established rules and plot. You can RP at any level - basic, intermediate or advanced. Five years on from Voldemort’s downfall and the Wizarding World is ...

I'm going to have to disagree with my friends here.... This is a very overused idea. Yes, it was written very well, like always but you cant make a silk ...

Yes, Holly Lisle is an online writing Godess. I forgot about her actually. Thanks for reminding me. The problem is my whole novel is first person - so this isnt ...

I dont really have any idea about the plot. I have some scenes in my head. Thats all. I just know that it has potential to be.. complicated.

Well I'm open to suggestion of other ways to plot. I need to be in total control of this one before I write it though. Its very complex and precise ...

Because of my intense workload at College I shall not be doing Nano. however I think I'm going to use the snowflake method to do a real in depth outline ...

Several things to say before I will do an in depth critique. :arrow: This is more like "Chapter 1" - Prologues are becoming a thing to avoid. Rename it to ...

These kinds of introductions have quickly become nothing short of a cliche. Just butcher this and begin your story straight away, because believe it or not, the plot makes me ...

My last name is terrible so If I was to be published it would be: Adam Rimrose Eric Matthew Odum, your proper name is better.